Very interesting.

This poem is very unique, but also really good. I like it alot!!!

Very well said
i really like n appreciate ur thoughts

well done
good luck
Ck

Aw this poem is really good...you really are good at writing poems..keep it up!!

Hey babe its a really great poem keep up the good work
Love,
Tara

"Sleep for the day and sleep for the night"
WOW! that line was fantastic, it just brought the last stanza something extra special and interesting, I just love that line

Now onto the poem as a whole, I really enjoy the way you have laid it out the rhyme scheme seems to flow naturally and isnt forced which is very good and makes the poem all the more interesting to read, I enjoyed this stanza the most:

The flying white dove will bring you the end,
Closing the sea of endlessness that defends,
Bringing you to the light of night in which it mends

I think this really shines through! along with that line I like, well done and keep writing!

Great poem. I really liked that it gave off kind of a mysterious vibe. Keep up the good work.

-Jason

Good poem. I like it alot. It's interesting and some what cofusing. But I get it.

--Summer

Again this is another great poem. but my love is still my fav

I really love your poem
its really sweet
keep writing
>>gIrL

Wow one of the best i read

Good job!!
very well said

Awesome job...stunning work...wow!!

Wow-- amazing i really like it! keep it up!

Awww this is a great poem I wish I was able to write poems like u

This poem was great.
i love it

Fear not the end, fear not the start,
For at the end there is no more pain,
The loss of love forever maintains,
Shining doubts are made through windows.

i just loved this stanza most of all.
great impact.
5/5
keep up the good work.
best wishes
take care