The way of Love

by White Blizzard   Apr 25, 2006


The way you speak to me is a fire of love,
In the clouds the rain moves your name with love,
To my eyes you are the bearer of sweet and pure eternity,

To look at you I feel prosperity
I feel I could live forever
I think you could break the cold wind surrounding my insecurity

The creature of love we all are, the blessing of a kiss we crave
Never knowing that the end of that loving kiss may send us to our grave
My heart beats in time with love, love being the end of all worry.

To know you chose me over the many
I feel I could run around the stepping stones of life singing your name
Seeing you at the end of the Light with your beauty the same.

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  • 18 years ago

    by gemowski

    This is a fab poem i can relate to it. you're a good writer.

    gema xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason

    Once again great poem, I really like the way you word things. Good job.

    -Jason

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    This poem is another triumph well done to you, your writing is really deep and thoughtful and also shows some very true and raw emotions, I especially enjoyed this poem as it speaks of a feeling that only the writer can truly understand yet it lets the reader in on it so we can begin to...

    I have no critique to offer as I think this poem needs no improvements, keep writing and carry on showing us your talent!
    take care!

  • 18 years ago

    by Poptart

    This poem was good as well and it was so sweet..i love it!!

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    This is a wonderful poem. i love it

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