Good job the white blizzard thats a really good poem i'm srry about wat happened.
Love,
Tara

This is a wonderful poem. i love it

This poem was good as well and it was so sweet..i love it!!

This poem is another triumph well done to you, your writing is really deep and thoughtful and also shows some very true and raw emotions, I especially enjoyed this poem as it speaks of a feeling that only the writer can truly understand yet it lets the reader in on it so we can begin to...

I have no critique to offer as I think this poem needs no improvements, keep writing and carry on showing us your talent!
take care!

Once again great poem, I really like the way you word things. Good job.

-Jason

This is a fab poem i can relate to it. you're a good writer.

gema xoxox