Chelsey-Lynn, I just want to say that I think it's a wonderful thing that you wrote this. You did a fantastic job on it. Simply superb!

Chels , You have a big heart deary ...

You know if people could just stand on the outsides of their bodies and see the pain and hurt they cause another with their jokes ad insults or have a body jump and be that other person I think they would realize that words sting not only the eyes but also the heart ..........

You always have a way of making people see the reality of a person's pain .
Beautifully written heartfelt poem Chels , you truly are beautiful inside and out ........
Love ya A.I.D Great big Muahs !!!!
From cyber Mommy........

You have always been some an empathetic person Chelsey - the first stanza hit me like a semi trailer - You know why and we both know how cruel and hurtful kids can be - I hope this poem promotes alot mroe tolerance and respect for people and cultures, situations and lifestyles that differ from our own - its a strong write babygurl with a powerful message - loved it :o)

Wow u know i wanted to print this poem out and post it all over school because that is so true its just like my school well probely like most you know. I hate how that if your to skinny they think its gross and if your to big they think its gross it just ticks me off probely like u
well done this almost made me cry
-chelsey-

I found ur poem carrying a real good message, this fact is true and happens everywhere, i myself has seen lots of people like them around me in universuty & i guess it's not either appropriate or decent of people talking about about others whom they think formt heir point of views GEEKS...Good work

You tell them, I know I get sick of it
'Oh my God she is sooo thin I bet she makes herself sick!' or 'She is sooo quite I bet she has no friends'
thanks this poem touched me
for all the stepped on and kicked
thank you for standing up
-Allie

Oh my dear Chelsey...you have a heart of the purest gold and this poem conveys that purity! I applaud you for your open mindedness, it's so much harder to be the one who takes up for those that are put down, but so much more rewarding!
I really love this stanza because it's so insighful:

"So what he's somewhat overweight
It's probably people who crack on his size
That makes him the way he is
I wonder what you look like in his eyes"

Take care and keep it up~Holly

E-X-C-E-L-L-E-N-T!!!!!!

I loved this. It is true. I agree with your bottom paragraph thing. Good job hunn..* 5/5

I see this every day and yet i do nothing to stop it when the people i call friends are doing the ridiculing this poem has made me seen the other side that i never thought to look at
next time i hear that i will stand up for him and i thank you for making this world a better place

I have yet to see a more beautiful heart than yours... i promise.

I love your poem i used to be the fat kids and it kids that made fun of me that made me that way iam just glade ther is wondeful peppol like you

This rocks! it was cos of peopel liek this i made it my mission to befriend " the geeks". And ive completed my mission :). and ever since ive been friends with them everythings been so much better, and im glad some one else understands ttoo. yiyur poem kicks asssssssssss