by Chelsey Apr 25, 2006
category :
Internet slang /
love, romance
It was just another arguement, just another night |
by Bridgette
This is really good.. very touching.. i really liked it. great job on this. |
Wow that was defintly diffrent but i love the style |
by silvervein
Mind blowing..... but very sad. very good... |
by HOLLY ARMER
Quite interesting the way you tied it all together. I was intrigued from the beginning, though it did get kind of confusing in parts. |
It was slightly different and it was likeable. The words were good though they sometimes messed with the flow especially somewhere in the third stanza. Imagery well done as was the story line with the rain. |