Comments : Missing Pieces

  • 18 years ago

    by DancingForGod

    I love the voice you used in this poem, and the phrases, especially "force feed by enemy hands
    hurt for their pleasurable laughs", great overall!

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Very powerful message!
    I think in the second line you mean fed not feed.
    Anyway, well done...this is something many can relate too.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly