by Meggie33 Apr 25, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Guide me through the dark, un- caring night, |
by Carmen
Keep up the good work, meggie. i really enjoy your poems. lalala |
by Jessica
You just string words together so easily! and they sound so perfect together! the flow and the rhymes in this poem were great, there was a lot of emotion and it really shone through! nice write! 5/5 |
by N J Thornton
It's just what everyone wants from a the one you love, for them to be there for you as you are for them. You portrayed this very well. You must of covered almost every aspect of a relationship too, which was good. You had some very beautiful lines in there too, especially at the start. |
by Jennifer
Wow...this poem was sooo good & I'm serously not just saying that, u have so much talent, u just made it on my favoret, I love this poem, it really touched me, plz never stop writing because I love ur poetry. |
by Russell
Wow...That was amazing.I havent read poems that good in a while.The rhyme and flow are amazing..Keep up the great work |