I loved it! the last part was a surprise...telling us to forget, then telling us to remember, i like it....good job and grrt flow, thx for ur comments,
love ya lots,
sore

I liked it. I'm mean it's sad but touching. And yeah i don't like the who and whom thing very well lol. As you can probably tell. anyway good job. 5/5
-Vino

I liked this poem :) Good job you did on it.. Very emotional to me, but good :)