The ship glides across the long darkened sea
Its sharpened silhouettes soaring high
The sails spreading as far as my ambitions
Me, standing alone, a desperate cry

words aren't enough to describe this poem in its, 'awesome-ness' lol. you continue to amaze and suprise me. you are what true poets are made of, and could definitely make money off this stuff if you worked on it, and published your stuff. keep it up

When I read this poem, I was like, "Wow, that's good," and I looked at the title, and I'm like THAT TITLE IS PERFECT, lol. It's probably my favorite poem of yours, great job! 5/5

I could sit and read your poetry all day, as it is I'm actually at school doing this so I probably shouldn't =P, Another great write though! Can't fault it at all, everything works so beautifully! Another 5/5 x

This poem is so surreal.. you have such an amazing imagination. :)