Wake Up to the Truth

by LadyPearl   Apr 25, 2006


**Keep reading, it's not an average cutting poem**Meant to be short and straight to the topic**

The clock strikes as the midnight moon grieves
It watches in sorrow as I raise the blade
In my trembling weeping eyes, I perceive
That nothing can ever liven my soul

The air around me grows ever so cold
As it mourns it's sinister, dying song
Swinging up the blade, the crimson behold
All my pain and sorrow has been unleashed

And In relaxation I sleep in bliss
Drifting off to a world of tranquility
Wishing again to meet with death's kiss
So to shed away whats left of reality

Crystal sunlight pours into my eyes
I realize the day begins again
No matter how i hurt or wish to die
Sooner or later, I must face the truth

*Cutting is a temporary relief, face up to your fears. Please rate and comment on how you feel about this message.**I'll return the favor

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  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Your right, that wasn't a normal cutting poem, and I am glad I read it. In fact it was really quite good. You understand the cutter, but at the same time you post the message our that cutting will not fix your porblems, okay dealing with them can. You are a strong person to be able to look past cutting, understand why people do that, and still telling them that they can make it through, that they need to keep going anyway. Great poem.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    I agree with you and self-harm is a "self" ish act in my opinion...it certainly started like ur average "slash" poem but you managed to steer it away...

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah Tiernan

    That comment yo said is tru i would no i used to cut and i kno that it doesnt solve anything the pain is only there for a little bit the blood evntually stops and then all the feeling abnd emotions u fely come back plus you hurt the ppl u love the most and cause pain to them and the u keep cutting hoping to let loose of the pain but it doesnt it really is only temporary the poem was great as well plz keep writing
    *~*Hannah*~*

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    OMG wow what an amazing poem! You were right, this was no average work, infact it was totally unique and absolutely magnificently well penned. I really hope you are doing okay. Keep up your great work! 5/5

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