Your writing has potential, but maybe if you spaced your lines a little clearer. And don't try so hard to rhyme every line, just let it flow, there are plenty of stanzas out there, just let the words come. :)
Hey maggie! awesome poem and thanks a million for hte comment! love you!! keep writing!
p.s.- is this about matt's jokes??
i notice they looked to be bothering you latley! your awesoeme and dont let it get to you! but if it is just let me know! thanks! love ya