by MemoirsOfMe Apr 25, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I feel his breath |
by aDORKable x3
Wow that was a good one! I liked it! |
Wow that was reelyy good! i got suckd in. i agree with the others never stop writing! 5/5 for sure! |
by Emily
For some reason, this poem just stuck with me. I absolutely adore it. You can't possibly be new to writing your so good! Excellent job! 22353456/5 |
Fantastic peice, really absorbs the reader. has a clear content good progression and great structure making it easy to read and understand. |
Yeah i agree with Tripp, never stop writing! Awesome poem i fell right into it.. well ttfn |