God! why must you be so good at poetry haha. you definitely need to write more poems. do the world a favor, and never stop writing.

Yeah i agree with Tripp, never stop writing! Awesome poem i fell right into it.. well ttfn

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Fantastic peice, really absorbs the reader. has a clear content good progression and great structure making it easy to read and understand.

5/5

For some reason, this poem just stuck with me. I absolutely adore it. You can't possibly be new to writing your so good! Excellent job! 22353456/5

Wow that was reelyy good! i got suckd in. i agree with the others never stop writing! 5/5 for sure!
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Wow that was a good one! I liked it!
*5/5*
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