Powerful and beautifully written!! Great work Kim :)

U did pictute failure as a pth towards succeess in a pome that was skilfully wirtten
all the best

Amazing! I really like your writing. You have improved your writing so much! I bet you can look back on your old stuff, and see the huge difference! This was a really breath-taking poem. It was almost as if I were reading a story from a fairy-tale. Nice job!