Hey! this poem was very well written... the flow was nice. It gave me a image in my mind of what the point in the poem you were trying to reach.. Good job.. I gave you a 5/5 and it was well deserved.. keep up the good work...

You are an awesome writer.

Well written and it flowed together nicely. I love your poems. Keep up the good work. :)

-Naomi

WOW!!! that poem was EXCELLENT i loved it soooo much!!! excellent job!

Ok i wont kill myself :)