Wow! your a great writer!! this poem was so strong and sad! i loved it! great job! molly XoOx

Hey thank you for commenting. your poem was so great! its so sad and so many ppl can relate to it. well done!

This poem is amazing, it's beautifully sad, and I love the words that you used. I also know loneliness, so I can relate to it. 5/5 Keep writing.

Hiya, Jenna Balkin... How are you... Great poem... it's about time I read a poem from a fellow Aussie, that I actually enjoyed... not that I'm from down under or anything... it's a secret where I reside. lol. Anyways you write the type of poems I wish I had the talents to write, but then it doesn't really matter, I'm not really a poet, but that's only because I can't write like you. >_>

I'm giving you a five, and if there's any truth to this poem, I'll love you, wink wink... only joking, that would be cradle snatching. lol, Hope that made you smile. Anyways talent should be exercised often, so I hope you keep writing, as you should hope I keep reading. ^_^ anyway I'll let you got cause this is getting awfully long, plus I still have 197 forum post to go. lol

CYA
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Hey, thanks so much again for giving me a place and for all the comments n i will let u kno wen i write 1..anyway..wow amazing poem. how can u say mine are good wen ive read just 1 n its bettr than all of mine put 2gethr..amazing...5/5

In the end she finds,
that she's run out of trust...
everyone's cloud holds silver,
so why does only mine rust...'

that was a great ending! thanks for writing that poem it was really good!!
XoOx molly