by Kenshin Apr 26, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
family
*this is a collaboration between me and cousin, I started the first stanza and Nada did the second one and so on and so forth* |
by Sole
Great poem - I think the collaboration worked well. Thoough there were a lost of changes through form, it started off as a poem, and gradually became a conversation, before turning back towards being more of a direct poem again. However, tis did not even scratch the quality of the poem. It was incredibly well written by two obviously talented people. |
by Emily
This was so uniquely written. I'm glad that some writers can still write stories about things that matter--The values that won't be lost, if people like grandfather continue to pass them on to the next generation. |