by Lost & Delirious Apr 26, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
My jewel of mystery, |
Your Poem Really Made Me Identify How Lost I Feel At Times, I Really Think That You Take The Heart Of Your Problems And Share It Poetically...And Thats The Definition Of Brilliance |
by Bridgette
Awww.. that is so sad. But you did a great job on this. The flow and rhtyhm of it was perfect and you choice your words very well! Great job on this! 5/5 |
by Darien
The beginning and the end of the poem closed this one in really nicely. Everything connected really well, and you stayed on topic. Great stuff. |
by BrokenTessa
Thats pretty trippy, I liked they way that you described your heart, and all the wrong things about it. |
Another masterpiece....I have never read poem about a broken heart like this one before...You did it so unique, so fragile and so beautiful in a sad way...Perfect once again!!! Keep up the good work...I think I will add you to my faves, you deserve that =0) Love your poems... |