Wow. I love the emotion that was put into the poem. It explains me to a point that I start to feel sad. Keep up the good work.

-Naomi ♥

Hey this is a really good poem. Very well written and very heartfelt. It reminds me of someone I know, who goes through so much pain like this. Anyways, great job. Keep it up, and thanks for commenting on mine. I really appreciate it. :-)

Best Wishes Always

Very nice from the start to the end
good work
keep it up
love
amy

Another masterpiece....I have never read poem about a broken heart like this one before...You did it so unique, so fragile and so beautiful in a sad way...Perfect once again!!! Keep up the good work...I think I will add you to my faves, you deserve that =0) Love your poems...

Much Love sabrina

Thats pretty trippy, I liked they way that you described your heart, and all the wrong things about it.
thanx for commenting on my poem
*~*BrokenTessa*~*

The beginning and the end of the poem closed this one in really nicely. Everything connected really well, and you stayed on topic. Great stuff.

Awww.. that is so sad. But you did a great job on this. The flow and rhtyhm of it was perfect and you choice your words very well! Great job on this! 5/5

Your Poem Really Made Me Identify How Lost I Feel At Times, I Really Think That You Take The Heart Of Your Problems And Share It Poetically...And Thats The Definition Of Brilliance
xoxo-Nikki-xoxo
5/5-Trully Heart-felt