Really liked the poem. im gonna read it agen wen im more awake. but from what i can see its really powerful and thought- provoking. u need to wrote a 2nd one. cos im filled wiv suspense. bless!!! chuckles.

I luv it. obv not da best reaction to a sad poem but it's a very insightful, emotive, dark and powerful piece. It's sad bcos its so tru and this poem definitely is an insight into the mind of sum1 hu is depressed and how much of a struggle it is to try and deal with pain and fear that haunts people daily.
All my love,
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Pretending to be happy when you're torn up inside is the hardest thing to do. Great job on portraying the pain someone can lock up inside, your description was just too good. Loved it.

Absolutely gorgeous. This poem flowed really well. definitely brought a tear to my eye. xox