I give you a four...don't get me wrong i mean you did a great job and all just that...well i'm not the greatest poet...i don't even think my poems are all that great...i honestly think i suck...but you and i and alot other poets need alot more work...it's really good...better then some of mine

Well this is only my first poem so I really want to improve my work. Anyway thanks a lot to all of you who spare a few minutes reading it and overcoat to those who comment, THANKS! IT MEANS A LOT TO ME!