Aw this is sad. Good though. I do think it could get deeper. I have a poem called "Suicide Note" You can read it if you want, You don't need to comment or nothing. It just might show you an idea of what I mean by making it deeper. Anywho, Great job though, && I hope things are alright! 5/5

`natalie xx

Hey your poem was really good. i like the way it flowed and expressed how you felt.
dee