I'm tired

I liked this poem alot. its different from everything else ive read. everyone gets tired of life at one time or another. and i can relate to this piece, great job. 5/5.

We all get very tired of life and very sad but you must concentrat on making yourself happy and not worring about others I know that sounds callous but if you make yourself happy then the others will follow

Agien another nice one

I gave you a 5.0 because this poem is Unique in it's own way, the way you expressed your feelings were fantastic. I enjoyed reading that poem, just remember life has many obsticles, We just have to get past them and Happiness shall unfold :)
Great Poem, Keep up the good work
GodBless
colt