I gave you a 5.0 because this poem is Unique in it's own way, the way you expressed your feelings were fantastic. I enjoyed reading that poem, just remember life has many obsticles, We just have to get past them and Happiness shall unfold :)
Great Poem, Keep up the good work
GodBless
colt

Agien another nice one

We all get very tired of life and very sad but you must concentrat on making yourself happy and not worring about others I know that sounds callous but if you make yourself happy then the others will follow

I liked this poem alot. its different from everything else ive read. everyone gets tired of life at one time or another. and i can relate to this piece, great job. 5/5.