Hmm....Sad, by any chance were you writing this to explain how you feel or wer you just writing this from nothing? i feel sad for you but great poem o hope your not mad that i didn't talk to you today

REALLY GOOD! i luved it! i especially liked..."to be held close
safe from all harm
to not feel alone
she wishes this upon a star"

i can relate...keep writing!!!

Amazing job love the flow it's so sad and it how i use to be before i met the love of my life keep up the good work 5.5

Another sad poem!

but you got a good talent in knowing how to put the emotions in it

i loved this part

"to not feel alone
she wishes this upon a star"

keep it up!