Hey! thats a REALLY awesome poem! and it was ur first :D good job. *hugs* ruthie xoxo

Your first poem! Holy %$%# it's very good!

I really really really loved it!

Fantastic write with a great flow!

Excellent write 5/5 definetely

Lotsaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

ps; hun, my english isn't perfect, I'd appreciate it alot if you help me correct those grammar mistakes you were talking about in your commment =)

--thanks-- =)

Excellent! If that was your first poem, then wow. My first poem was stupid!! :) Keep it up!