by Strange Angel Apr 26, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Autumn's gentle cooling rain |
by Fig
Ok, now thats just not fair. youve written too many good poems!!!! normally if someone writes loadsa poems i only comment on a few coz loads are rubbish. but ALL of these are soo beautiul. so im not commenting on any more. not today. so nyah! see how you like it. |
This is an absolutely beautiful poem and the imagery really transports the reader to the spring. The last line is very haunting and stands out as something quite bleak amongst the beauty. |
by Fallen Angel
Really superb write. Beautiful, really beautiful 5/5 |