I'm really sorry your friendship didn't last.... but a great poem came out of it. not your best, but still great. take care and stay strong hun, you know i'm always here for you. by the way, thanks for the comment. it means so much.
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Good job.. if you added more verses and/or didnt repeat the same ones over and over again that would make the poem even better!!! i gave you a four out of five.. keep up the good work tho...
take care
amanda and baby

I was kind of lost there for a minute.. until i read your explanation... 3/5