by Darren OSullivan Apr 26, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Like a bird souring in the sky |
by tinna
All of ur poems are soooo good. |
Now this poem I like. I would say it's your best one here. It has a good flow eventhough youre not keeping consistancy in the lines that are similar to the following repetition, the rhymes are catchy and meaningful and so is the whole poem. It's a great topic you've chosen. It's a 4.5 but since it's a topic that's not been written to death I'll give you a well deserved 5. Keep it up mate. |