by Unrequited Apr 26, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Crashing into electric silence |
by Ariana
Wow - there are so many different elements to this poem. I thought you portrayed yourself really effectively, the words you have chosen create a dark atmosphere and they also flow perfectly - the addition of 'infection....combustion' adds to this. I loved the last line, it is very powerful and stands on it's own and it is effective because it speaks directly to the reader. This was a fantastic poem :)) |