Very emotional! almost made me get a tear in my eye. wow 5/5 again..!
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Wow i really really liek it its like my poems, i write alot of stuff liek that but that was really good it made me think , great job:D

This was even better than the first one. you realy are talented and it shows your writting.great job

Omg !!! that was one of the bestest poems ive ever read. it really touched me as im having a rouch time wi family matters Omg Watta poem keep it up hunni xxxxxxxxxxxx

Thats a really good poem. I like it alot. You've used some words really well and thought alot about what to write. xx

Hey really wonderful poem, really, really love it, ive added u to mi fave's just 2 let u know
xxo mel

Hey really wonderful poem, really, really love it, ive added u to mi fave's just 2 let u know
xxo mel

Oh, i really really like it! you have ALOT of talent...more than most...i absolutely love this poem, and the one before it....

Glad to have found story of a girl part two...it was amazing

Pretty good ending.

xxxx ..::Broken Lullaby::..