Body Lies

by Luke   Apr 27, 2006


Cross the room, I see you wander
Watching, waiting, as you maunder
Your heart beats like a hand grenade
Your voice sings a sweet serenade
As I look, you know I feel you
If you hurt me, I will heal you

This is here, this is the truth
Fighting hard, both nail and tooth
Every spoken word so clear
Every moment holds a tear
All of these sights in my eyes
As I watch your body lies

Every single day we struggle
For each step we take, we stumble

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  • 18 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I really loved this poem my favorite part was 'Every single day we struggle
    For each step we take, we stumble'
    It flowed so well. I thought it was very good! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by elly

    I actually really like this. ^-^

  • 18 years ago

    by Ð맆îñ¥

    I really like this. the thyme is brilliant becasue none of it is forced, or appears to be at any rate. I especially love the last stanza.

    Jemma

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Interesting poem.. the only criticim that I have is its supposed to by lay lies, but I know that you did that for the rhyme scheme..

    preaty intersting.. I liked it

    thanx a lot for your comments they mean a lot to me

  • 18 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Very lovely. i especially like the last two lines... ties everything together in a very short yet powerful way.
    -A

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