Taste

by Luke   Apr 27, 2006


NOTE: this is a song, so ignore the numbers and such.

1:
Peel out
I hear a sound
And a shotgun is staring me down
Too late
For truly
Always waiting for the sun to fall

C:
Flo-Town
Cloverdale South
I still got that damn taste in my mouth
Late night
Sun sets
Why does this make me a wreck?

2:
Late night
Saw fight
We're discussing what's wrong and who's right
Her night gown
Makes me frown
I want to tear it right off of her frame

Ca:
Flo-Town
Cloverdale South
I still got her damn taste in my mouth
Late night
Sun sets
Why does she make me a wreck?

3:
What I found
In this town
It gives me some feeling of fame
This is
Over
I'm calling out to a force from above

Bridge:
Save me
Rape me
This is what makes me believe
When I tell her she'll never believe

C:
Flo-Town
Cloverdale South
I still got that damn taste in my mouth
Late night
Sun sets
Why does this make me a wreck?

Ca:
Flo-Town
Cloverdale South
I still got her damn taste in my mouth
Late night
Sun sets
Why does she make me a wreck?

Close:
She was
Nothing
Another hurdle to overcome
Moral hurdle to overcome
This is
The end
And she was never my friend

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  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    I like the flow and wish I could hear this song! lol. I can't really think of corrections soooo good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    I really like your style and how your words flow from inside to paper or computer (where ever you write things down). I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. The only thing I didn't really like about this one? "Why does this make me a wreck?"
    Just sounds weird to me.
    But that's my opinion and I don't hold much to it because opinions change like the days, and for me, even more frequently.

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Captivating rhythm and mysterious emotion

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This would make a really good song. It flows nicely & my favorite part was
    What I found
    In this town
    It gives me some feeling of fame
    This is
    Over
    I'm calling out to a force from above
    I dont know why but its just got a nice feel to it. but great job! 5/5*

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