Nightmare's submission

by Wings Of Flames   Apr 27, 2006


Figured it out yesterday,
Why leaves fall in the spring,
Why Ice melts in the cold,
Why no angels are to sing,

Discovered deep inside,
My windows crack and shatter,
Just trying to get it out,
Carved a bloody platter,

Decay grips across me,
Their death portrayed closer still,
Baby your on drugs,
By 14 on the pill,

Abortion entwined to her sides,
Everyone gets what they want,
When beauty moves then dies,
Left to consume the haunt,

Freeze in the summer,
Burn inside the snow,
Falling in the spring,
Autumn lets me go,

Locked in a glass case,
To a nightmare this is you,
Cloaked the unforgiven,
If only they ever knew.....

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  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    So powerful! Simply amazing. I'm in awe of your talent, really, I am. 5/5 =]

    -Jenna.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    That was very good but kinda scattered in places...the way it started was great but then it kinda got off track like the part about abortion and stuff.that threw me off...but other than tht it was very deep and sad..good job,
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Woah. this had even more description than before. awesomely amazing. loved ever single word. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Gr8 work love all the detail! congrats on gettin top 5 in my contest! u were really good. anyway, keep up the gr8 work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Loving this poem. So contradictory in the real world, yet very relevant for the dream world. You captured it perfectly!
    Great write.
    Take care and God Bless,
    Sarah-Joy

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