Garden of Eden

by LadyPearl   Apr 27, 2006


A garden so brilliant against other pallid flowers
Comes in view at this untimed hour
The Ideal performance of sparkling hues
Painted in white, yellow and blues

First comes the Dahlia, trembling from birth
Slowly rising from the comely Earth
Petals of white glisten in the fragrant light
Delicate to one's eye's delight

Next comes the rose, passionate and deep
The sun awaken the rose from sleep
Sometimes red, or pink and white
Each a tender, innocent sight

Ah, a tulip, filled with gentle grace
Leaving a smile upon one's face
Soft petals and leaves of rapture
Captures the true beauty of nature

Can't forget the lilacs, proud to rise above all
So strong the wind can't make it fall
It lingers on in various purple shades
And in that, a new sensation is made

Garden of Eden, so full of that pride
With rows and rows of blossoms on sides
The air around caresses my heart and soul
This is the Garden I'll always know

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  • 18 years ago

    by Elynnka

    *stares in awe* I couldn't write that of an amazing poem if someone threatened me with a gun O.o *is in love with you talent*
    ^^

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow. this was particularly descriptive. excellent work! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    Your words leave a beautiful picture in my mind. When reading this, I feel as if I'm sitting in this garden, and the flowers, which you describe so perfectly, are dancing around me and singing to me the song of their beauty.

    one of my favorites.

    Rave.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*JESSiE*~

    Wow!!!! when i read this poem it was like i was there!!!!! you described it really good!!!!!!!

    xoxoxox
    JESSiE

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow.. this was very good, and it almost won a place in my contest, if there were more places, you definetely would be on them! great job on this poem, the descriptions were amazing, it flowed well, and it was just so peaceful, i could really imagine myself there! brilliant job! 5/5