I don't know about using the word broken in the last stanza three times. It kind of loses the affect even though the words seem to fit so maybe just find another word to use instead of you wanted. The concept is really good because I think other people relate to it. The title stands alone but you use the same word over and over again. You don't really have to repeate what we already know :)

Omg i luv this sooo much. i can seriously relate to it. its just awesome good job 5/5

Great write... I love the imagery of the broken mirror with your heart... Keep up the good work! 5/5

Wow... that was good...

mostly everything inn that peom... means everything about me.. .

Lovely.

I liked it! good poem and well done, i wasnt sure if id read it before, but it appears i have not. i liked it better than the last one i read. take care!
-Luke

Your poem was amazing. i can really relate.. not knowing what exactly there looking for or what is or isnt good enough. keep it up..
dee

Beautiful. i love the way it all comes 2gether. im sad you feel this way and i hope life shapes up for u! good work, be happy.. smile!

Great poem. I can relate to it alot.
Check out some of mine, I'd love to know what you think.
Great job.

*BloodShotEyes*

Verry good and imotional i like it xxx check out my poems n comment XxX if u wanna chat lovely_lil_biatch@hotmail.co.uk charlotte XXx

Honestly I loved your poem. I could relate to it alot. You should check out mine if you want. Later

♥ Trista ♥

I bet that uh.. i could realate to this poem my poems suck so yeah

Wow very powerful last lines. This is a very good poem. A good plot, rhyme, and meter for the most part. Good piece.

This is a really good poem.. and a great ending! Keep it up!!

I loved it. I've actually felt that way before, so it was even more awesome.

Hey that was a really good poem

This is a fantastic poem! To be honest, I just loved it!

Ur poems are speechless

Loved it!....liked the ending of it....5/5!

Again, I can see why you get so many comments and votes, you are a very talented writer and it has been my plesaure to read a few, with many more to come. Thanx..Timothy r