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Omg! that really gave me chills as i read that! amazing is all i have to say

Awww.. that is soo sad, and yet another excellent poem! you truly have a talent.. this one was also extremely powerful and very heartfelt.. i could really feel your pain.. wonderful work! 5/5!

This is a nice and good poem... Really liked it!

Wow. This poem is totally amazing. I'm going through that same thing right now. I change for him and yet, I'm still never good enough.

Wow its great and full of feeling. i love the last line "the one that's broken is me" kind of shows in just one line how hurt and broken u really are.
i hope everything gets better for u =)

Love
Jacs
xxxx

Wow i loved it

Wow you are truly an amazing writer. i look up to your work so much. keep on writing you have a great talent!!!

-dani

5/5. I really love this poem! It has alot of emotions in it and almost made me cry!

Your on my favorites list~

I am absolutely in love with your poem. the emotions that you bring together are so intense and just makes me want to keep reading. Keep up the good work.

This is the way i feel all the time!! i added you to my favorites! i olve all your poems!!