One last time...

by SplitSided   Apr 27, 2006


When I've finally closed my eyes.
And said all my goodbye's.
And with no surprise.
Will you realize that I have died.
Our time here is short.
And I think that I've finally given up hope.
Hope that you'll turn around.
But once again you shoot me down.
Nobody can watch me freeze.
But you watch with ease.
You say that your there for me but your not.
And for awhile you were all I've got.
But not anymore.
That's out the door.
I'm not gonna wait any longer.
Without you I'm that much stronger.
Like your rose I have died.
Don't ask why.
I'm not gonna do it one last time.
Will you erase our memories.
Will you watch me as I begin to freeze.
Will you watch as I no longer breathe.
Everything that I've done has been in vein.
And caused all my pain.
Ruined my name.
Brought me all my disdain.
And drove me insane.
Can you see the greater wrong of your right.
Or will you let me die tonight.
Will you let me die.
Watch me close my eyes.
And watch as I die.
Ask me to do it one more time.
I hold onto what I have left.
I hold onto my life that seems to be alittle messed.
Memories will haunt your dreams.
And I'll live in your silent screams.
I think that I've finally made up my mind.
Just let me close my eyes.
Just let me die.
I don't want to do this one last time...

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lori

    Very beautiful. Sad, but beautifully written and the word choice was so great.

    Wonderful job!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lori

    Wow, that was a very emotional and sad poem. It was also very beautiful and the flow was impeccable. You did a great job with this piece because it was just something I could tell came from inside.

    Beautiful work
    Loni

  • 14 years ago

    by Lori

    Wow, that was a very emotional and sad poem. It was also very beautiful and the flow was impeccable. You did a great job with this piece because it was just something I could tell came from inside.

    Beautiful work
    Loni

  • 14 years ago

    by Lori

    Wow, that was a very emotional and sad poem. It was also very beautiful and the flow was impeccable. You did a great job with this piece because it was just something I could tell came from inside.

    Beautiful work
    Loni

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow. this poem was excellent! mixed emotions, very well written and extremely creative.

    Memories will haunt your dreams.
    And I'll live in your silent screams.

    Thos two lines really stuck out to me, my favorite ones. I've read a few other of your pieces and you have great talent. i also noticed your not afraid to express yourself at all. you say exactly how you feel, and that's a wonderful thing. keep writing, don't stop! 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

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