This was sad. Really good though. It'd go cool as a rap lol. Really cool poem, Keep it up! 5/5

`taleee xx

Ae wat a nice deep touching poem! i loved it!!!! really sad but i love it.

awsome work 5/5

sarahxxx

Hey good poem. Thanks for the comment. =)

Wow. this poem was excellent! mixed emotions, very well written and extremely creative.

Memories will haunt your dreams.
And I'll live in your silent screams.

Thos two lines really stuck out to me, my favorite ones. I've read a few other of your pieces and you have great talent. i also noticed your not afraid to express yourself at all. you say exactly how you feel, and that's a wonderful thing. keep writing, don't stop! 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Wow, that was a very emotional and sad poem. It was also very beautiful and the flow was impeccable. You did a great job with this piece because it was just something I could tell came from inside.

Beautiful work
Loni

Wow, that was a very emotional and sad poem. It was also very beautiful and the flow was impeccable. You did a great job with this piece because it was just something I could tell came from inside.

Beautiful work
Loni

Wow, that was a very emotional and sad poem. It was also very beautiful and the flow was impeccable. You did a great job with this piece because it was just something I could tell came from inside.

Beautiful work
Loni

Very beautiful. Sad, but beautifully written and the word choice was so great.

Wonderful job!!!