Nicely writen
i like it

keep it up
CK

It took a little to understand but i like

I enjoyed this poem, I really love reading dark poems and though yours was short it captured me and kept me gripped throughout, the layout was interesting making it like a story but still using rhyme which I enjoyed, this poem is a very good example of dark poetry and I am looking forward to reading more! Take care

katie!

I like this alot it has a feeling of forbidding to it