I thought this was great. I could imagine this being said in front of a crowd at a Poetry Joint or even to your best of friends... I thought the poem spoke for itself. Good! Keep writing.

Great poem!!! I liked it at a lot and can't wait to read your other stuff!!! but u were rite, i think some of ur poems will relate to me in a way.... anywayz im off to check ur other work, you can always check out my poems from time to time

Hey i love this poem. its really good. i really like the way you have worded it
thanx 4 commenting on mine. keep strong
xxoo mel

Hey that peom was amazing. as dorky as it sounds.. that got me excited to read the rest of what youve posted haha. thanks a lot for your comment on mine too
dee

Arrrh hun this is great i feel this why somethimes.
keep up the good work your a good writer
xoxoxo
gem

Hey awsome poem keep up the good work and i can relate to this poem really well

Razors_edge

Gurl u were right, i can relate to u in this poem as u could in myne, im adding u to my favorites, i look forward to reading something new of your

Hey ive been reading a few of your poems and i must say im impressed you write beautifully and have alot of meaning in your work excellent job well done