Ok this is great and all (but a little fingers down the throat if you get me)
You write great poetry...but again WRITE SOMETHING HAPPY ABOUT REAL LIFE
grr
from an annoyed friend

Wow what a fantastic write. Love how you use so many different words for friend.

Fantastic, loved the style and everything.

I'm impressed. It's a great piece!

Very well done sweety!

Lotsaaa love
-xxx-

Wow...*sniffs*. I dont know why but I always get the feeling your speaking to me through your poems. This is just what I needed to read right now. It was so great...just beautiful...I'm a tad overwhelmed so I'm stepping away from the keyboard now....

Wut a poem sole. you seem so talented and i loves your style . you are in my favorites no doubt

love

That is amazing. really and truly a beautiful poem. It had incredible flow and great diction. fabulous.
-Suzie J

A strong poem of friendship. I enjoyed reading this.. I liked the emotion in it.. the strength of the friendship..

Another great poem :) 5/5

This is such a great poem! It shows such deep feelings that you have for a friend. My favorite lines were:
Stay strong my heartache
I'll fall, but you can fly
Stay strong my sorrow
Don't listen to them lie
I loved it. Great job! 5/5*

Really nice and sweet, good work as always!

Cute.
This really made me smile.
Great job writing this.
No wonder it is rated 5.0

:)

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