Blame the one I became

by Mona   Apr 27, 2006


You took my arm and tightly clutched it
Yet your wall remained untouched
Until I bashed my fists right into it
And broke it down, bit by bit

You cried, you cried in the rain
No one noticed, so you did it again
You stood, you stood against the thunder
But it was too late you were falling under

I didn't stay to catch your fall
Didn't stay to rebuild your wall
Left you in your misery and alone
For you to make it on your own

You screamed, you screamed my name
Blamed oh blamed the one I became
Oh yes, oh yes I've let you down
Now fall, now fall and silently drown

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  • 18 years ago

    by Paul

    And you say your english isnt that great. Well I'll tell you one thing hun, it surely seems like your english is awesome. Who gives you your lessons anyway? :P J/k. But GREAT poem. I loved every line of it. Write a new one soon, would ya? Keep it up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Amazing poem ma dear!
    You constantly amaze me!
    ahh there's not much more i can say!!
    love uxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Cody

    Great poem I loved the rhyme because it is the same pattern i always use and the emotion in the poem leaves you with a lot to think about as a good poem should

  • 18 years ago

    by heartbrOken

    Omg.....

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephy

    Wow!!!
    this one just blew me away!
    So figurative...I love it!
    it says alot...I could feel the emotions somehow...
    Amazing as always dear!
    love ya!-xxx-

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