Hmm brilliant! I love how you describe all those colors. It's fantastic.

The last stanza was so powerfull. Really swept me off my feet. "although our dreams are just our goals, they make us we we are"

That's very deep.

Loved this poem! Very well done

Lotsaaaaaa love
-xxx-

Why thanku, dear friend. That comment mean so much! You set a stunning example : ) lol

~!MoO MoO!~

Fabulous poem suzie jean
My excpectations have now been raised by this piece of art.
= P
I hope your dreams come true
Love
~Em

Oooooh. thanku also emma. I hope so too (Lol).

Why does everyone say what I want to say before me? Brilliant poem Susie, and like Emma I do hope your dreams come true. I know mine aren't but, meh. My dreams are too hard to reach except becoming a good golfer which I know I can do :). Anyway great work you are very artistic and articulate with your work. Cya
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Hey snoo, yeah i made an account.

this is a really really good poem. its deep and meaningful.
keep it up

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SUZIE!!!
Come And Join My Club!!!
please =)!
It's called poet's Incision
you know you want to, lol
anyway thought I'd let you know, but if you dont want to it's cool.
cya round
~Moo Moo

I love this one so much! how you compared the rainbow and the rain. everytime i read one of your poems i say that its my favourite until i read another. x.x you are an amazing writer.

Kat

Beautiful poem! I love how you expressed all the colors! AH I love it! lol. I hope all your dreams do come true :)

Love it! it was nice to read a cheery poem of yours! the consept was so well thought of! brillient work my friend.

i loved the way you went through each colour. that was very well done

Ruby

It was very cute and enchanting. The colours expressing a something, I liked. Wonderfully done.