Hey! OMG...wow! You really landed this poem! It's awesome! Really well written and your rhymes are awesome! Good job! It's a 5/5 for sure! Keep writing . . .
*Lisa*

This is lovely Gem! This is such a strong poem! :) It's like saying, "I'm gonna do what I want, when I want, and no one is conna stop me!" :) I like it! Great job! Keep it up!
xoxo

"They say life is short
Well who the fcuk are they?
Life's the longest thing I'm gonna do
So I'm living my own way!!"

Repitition is great for poems but its effing annoying when people keep saying it to your face hey. I liked this poem, it had attitude and a "I dont care f*@#" feeling to it :) Its something that alot of poems are lacking these days. Take Care.

Sorry, that didnt make sense
I meant to say a "I dont care" feeling to it.
:/