Mother

by gemowski   Apr 27, 2006


Why does he do this all the time, he always takes things of mine.
he's wines me up oh so much
"i might push him in that bush"

but i just bite my lip and walk away
I've not got time for this today.
I'm planning on running away.

I've had another fall out with my mum, here is how it all begun.
my brother the youngest of 3 just started pocking me,
so i pocked him back a bit too hard and he started crying because is too bloody mard.
then mum kicked of for a change because she in a drunken rage,
she slapped me hard across my face,
an once again i walk away she's just gone that little bit too far today
so i am going to run away.
this time she'll pay I'll make sure of that
sometimes i think my mums a twat.

and thats the end of that

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  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Woot! bumped it up .1

  • The ryhme seemed a little rocky and forced at times!! But still a good write!!! 4/5!! Never quit writing!!

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    It flowed okay, but some parts seemed forced. I'm really sorry if the happened. It had a lot of emotion in it. You have some talent. Good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Datz sadd... hope you guyz are alrite now.. :) your poem rhymes but not very easily sometimes.. jus my opinion :P keep writing!
    jessy