by gemowski Apr 27, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
family
Why does he do this all the time, he always takes things of mine. |
by Darien
Woot! bumped it up .1 |
The ryhme seemed a little rocky and forced at times!! But still a good write!!! 4/5!! Never quit writing!! |
It flowed okay, but some parts seemed forced. I'm really sorry if the happened. It had a lot of emotion in it. You have some talent. Good job! |
by Jessica
Datz sadd... hope you guyz are alrite now.. :) your poem rhymes but not very easily sometimes.. jus my opinion :P keep writing! |