This is a great poem soecialy as its ur first. maybe u could just seperate the lines a little cuz its hard 2 read but otherwise tis really gd and i no exactly wt u mean. take care & if u ever wanna talk im here 5/5

Good poem. I've been through what you're stating in your poem just 5 weeks ago, but after 2 weeks, I decided not to wait for him and I'm now going out with a different guy who treats me a lot better and makes me more happy, even though, when I was with my ex, I never would of thought I would love someone else more. You did a great job on your poem though, I really liked it, keep it up.