Idn anymore

by giggles   Apr 27, 2006


Hell has opened up
and swallowed me whole
my world has closed
and with it my soul

you took away
all that was mine
you took away my colors
you took away my shine

so here i am
with nothing left to give
i dont want to be here
i dont want to live

pain is my comfort
comfort is my pain
as you look at me
you see my shame

how can i tell you
that i am alright
how can i stay here
why not end the fight

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  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Simple words but a very powerful meaning. your emotions of hurt n betrayal i felt was on ur piece here.

    you took away
    all that was mine
    you took away my colors
    you took away my shine

    so here i am
    with nothing left to give
    i dont want to be here
    i dont want to live

    these parts were my favorite cuz i can realte and has many people can too. feeling all alone but yet they arent cuz they have their friend to help them right up. you did a great job here once again. keep on writing.
    4/5

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

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