Wow
5/5
keep it up . Well done

Rachael

Love the poem, it makes me think 'what really causes kindness'? Great Flow, ryhm, and theme, but I think this really could have easily been broken into stanzas. I'll keep coming back.

~Purple~

Good flow, great rhyme sceme, but i have one question, i may seem a little slow on this, but who is the "you"? you are referring to everyone, correct? Sorry, just a meer thought. ^_^

Thats true

Excellent poem! You definetly got a point out , and its totally true! Are ppl really themselfs or acting? Great write definetely 5/5!
-cheers- ^_^

I really loved this piece. So much truth in it. So many people today are just.. All the same? Non one anymore be's themselves. It's sad. You did a great job on this piece though. Really made me think. Keep it up 5/5

`taleee xx

This is absolutely amazing.. i loved the truth in it and how u shed some light on the lives people lead.. u displayed a gr8 sense of rhythm and it had a powerful foundation; it wasnt shaky and unstable.. i loved ur last stanza; summed the whole poem for me, and esp. the last line just stuck with me..
gr8 job.. keep it up
thnx 4 the comment
take care
NannO

I thought this was an excellent piece again and it had some powerful truth in it. The flow and structure were brilliant too and the poem made perfect sense. keep up the great work. Thankyou for reading mine and my friends poems. :)

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! another freakin amazing poem. I think everyone in my entire freakin school should read this, so we can all just chill and live our own life, ya know? i admire your work. i really do, your completely amazing. 5/5 -jen-