by shawn hoskins Apr 27, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
I don't have any direction don't know were i'm going as i stare at your tombstone the tears start flowing, You were taken away too soon a life cut so short a friend so true, just wish there was some way you could've pulled through, I guess it just wasn't mean't to be we shared so many good times and now your free, all the memories we shared can never be taken from me, So i guess i'll see you on the other side i know your not feeling any pain, now i have to move on but things around here will never be the same. |
Another great one!!! good job and keep up the good work |
by John Jenkins
I feel the same way... i recently lost my cousin in a car accident in april |
by Bridgette
Aw this poem is so sad! It's a wonderful piece, filled with lots of emotion. I really liked it. The flow of it was great, and you had great word usage. 5/5** |